Goals: The biggest goals I have to complete this essay center around grammar. I have developed a strong thesis that I feel I can support throughout the essay. During this revision process I am going to focus on meeting word count while sticking within the parameters of my thesis. I used my rough draft as an opportunity to put all the paths I could take to support my thesis and now that I have a good list of arguments I plan to search for useful pieces of evidence that will cooperate with my ideas to strengthen my essay.

Plan to construct a strong essay: In my rough draft I didn’t use a project from our “lets talk about art” class just to allow my brain to process through the question at hand and form my own opinion. However now that I have planted the seed of my idea in the essay I plan to go back and incorporate a project to in a sense water the seed and help it grow into a strong piece of work.

Biggest Challenge: I feel my biggest challenge will be limiting the length of my paragraphs. I don’t have a good sense for when my paragraph is on the verge of repetitive so I plan to rework my paragraphs multiple times in order to make sure that I have trimmed any unnecessary baggage from my argument.

Resources: “Lets Talk about Art”

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